Well, here we go...

Hi, my name is Kinzie Morris and this is my story.  It all started about a 2 months before my 16th birthday.  My best friend  Beth McKee and her twin brother (and yes I have a crush on him) Brian had a sleepover for their 16th birthday party.  We had a great time playing games and telling stories when some time after midnight my parents showed up and took me home and now I am not friends with Beth.  I do not know what happened but Beth loathes me.  We go to the same school, have some of the same classes and my best friend absolutely hates me.  Every chance she gets she spews hate at me with Brian holding her back.  The only good thing about this is Brian actually kind of talks to me now.  He looks at me while his sister goes at me with what looks like he is apologetic that she is doing this.  I tell all this to my new best friend, Captain Roan, my cat, who looks at me while I am talking but the moment I stop, he goes back to licking himself.

Greetings!

Hello, My name is Staci and I feel I have a story that needs telling.  I have no training in this and I also have a problem voicing things and writing them down. I have problems putting sentences together and with punctuation. If you can get past this we will get along perfectly. I am very afraid to do this, so your opinions (nicely worded) are very much appreciated.

Thank You Lynne for helping me say what I meant to say.